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    #1

    Smile writing

    Please check the following sentences.

    (1) Amy was sure that it was her lost Lucky because it had a conspicious dark spot on its right eye.
    (2) So she shouted loud "Lucky! Lucky!"
    (3) The dog seemed to recognize its proper owner, so it wagged its tail joyfully and barked at Amy friendly.
    (4) While Amy crouched down to fondle Lucky, she argued with the woman it was her pet dog.
    (5) The woman tactfully explained to Amy the ins and outs.
    Last edited by contiluo; 31-Oct-2010 at 15:01. Reason: revision

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    #2

    Re: writing

    That makes three threads you have submitted all titled writing.

    Please make them more meaningful so that we can distinguish one from the other.

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    Smile Re: writing

    The thread of the story is as following.

    (1) Amy's pet, Lucky, was lost three days ago. She was trying to look for its whereabouts.
    (2) One day, while Amy was roaming the street, she a woman walking a dog which looked like her lost Lucky.
    (3) Amy chased them and caught up with them.
    (4) Amy stopped the woman and looked closely at the dog, which was being led by a leash attached to its collar.
    (5) Amy was sure that it was her lost Lucky because it had a conspicious spot on its right eye.
    (6) So she shouted loud "Lucky! Lucky!"
    (7) The dog seemed to recognize its rightful owner, so it wagged its tail joyfully and barked at Amy friendly.
    (8) While Amy crouched down to fondle Lucky, she srgued with the woman it was her pet, Lucky.
    (9) The woman tactfully explained to Amy the reasson why this happened.

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