[Grammar] Vocation Letter

[JetGopal]

dear sir

i would like to request short leave from Nov 24th - Dec 9th 2010, i want to spend this holidays with my parents. Last year August i was joined in this company, i never went for vocation and also this is my first vacation in our company, I need my passport before 24th. Kindly grant me a leave for 2 weeks.

thanking you



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[lauralie2]

Dear Sir

I would like to request 2 weeks' vacation leave from Nov 24th to Dec 9th, 2010 to spend the holidays with my parents. This will be my first leave since joining the company in August of last year. If my request is granted, I will need my passport before November 24th.


Thanking you,