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    Smile writing

    Please check the following sentences.


    (1) The woman found the dog Lucky in the park by chance three days ago.
    (2) Whe thought it was a stray dog, so she kept it as a pet.
    (3) She read the notice for lost Lucky in the bulletin board this morning, so she was going to return the puppy to its rightful owner.
    Last edited by contiluo; 02-Nov-2010 at 07:51. Reason: typo

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    #2

    Re: writing

    From the miss-spelling point of view, may I submit:
    (1) The woman found the dog Lucky in the park by chance three days ago.
    (2) We thought it was a stray dog, so she kept it as a pet.
    (3) She read the notice for lost Lucky in the bulletin board this morning, so she was going to return the puppy to its rightful owner.

    However, you could try reversing sections and inserting punctuation to enhance the grammar.

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