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    Para correction

    He thrusts his feet firmly down on the ground and springs up high into the air onto a tall tree. Skimming deftly over the trees, he chases Helen and tries to tackle her down with his feet. Helen turns around and puts up a brave fight against him but eventually loses to him, owing to his inimitable Kung Fu skills.

    Can someone please tell me if the above para sounds natural?

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    Re: Para correction

    Quote Originally Posted by daemon99 View Post
    He thrusts his feet firmly down on onto the ground and springs up high into the air onto a tall tree. Skimming deftly over the trees, he chases Helen and tries to tackle her down with his feet. Helen turns around and puts up a brave fight against him but eventually loses to him, owing to his inimitable Kung Fu skills.

    Can someone please tell me if the above para sounds natural?
    It seems ok to me. I've made a couple of minor alterations.

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