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    please proofread this: 80 words

    Hi all,

    Could you please proofread the paragraph below?

    Ok, they are good stories, and I certainly enjoyed reading them. I think that the style is one of the reasons I like the stories: the minimalist style like Raymond Carver, who's one of my favorite writers. And another reason should be coming from my experience of spending some time in Los Angels and of staying at hotels like the ones you just described, though practically I've never come across scenes like yours, so that I could relate myself to the stories.

    thank you very much in advance,

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    Re: please proofread this: 80 words

    Quote Originally Posted by kathere View Post
    We can't correct your homework. Though, we offer proofreading services, visit us as xxxxx for more info.
    Note that this appears to be an advertisement for a 'service' that requires a fee.

    While teachers on this thread do not wish to do or correct your homework, many of us are happy to proofread your attempts to write English.
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