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    Which is acceptable, (1) or (2) ?

    (1) We always insist diversified service.
    (2) We adhere to and offer the pluralistic service from start to finish.

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    Quote Originally Posted by contiluo View Post
    Which is acceptable, (1) or (2) ?

    (1) We always insist on diversified service.
    (2) We adhere to and offer the a pluralistic service from start to finish.
    Are they the only two choices? Can I say 'neither'?
    What are diversified and pluralistic services?

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    Both of the sentences originally mean that our services include a wide of variety items and we will do everything to satisfy our customers. I just don't know how to express the idea in a natural way.

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    Re: sentences

    Quote Originally Posted by contiluo View Post
    Both of the sentences originally mean that our services include a wide of variety items and we will do everything to satisfy our customers. I just don't know how to express the idea in a natural way.
    That was a better effort: "We provide a wide variety of services and we try to do everything possible to help our customers."

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