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  1. Newbie
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    Question Afterwards ...

    I am not sure if these sentences are correct ... could anybody help me?

    "She was fed up with her job. So she damaged the papers and throw her mobile phone away. Afterwards she left for holidays."

    Thanks!

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    Re: Afterwards ...

    Quote Originally Posted by gracolonia View Post
    I am not sure if these sentences are correct ... could anybody help me?

    "She was fed up with her job, so she damaged the papers and threw her mobile phone away. Afterwards she left for a holiday."

    Thanks!
    "Tore up" might be better than "damaged".

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