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    #1

    Thumbs up is it appropriate for cheerleadering for a volleyball team?

    Sampad is the one,yeah
    we will rock them all,yeah
    no one has the gut
    to compete with sampad,yeah

    you liking it or not
    in your face we're getting higher
    there're always ups and downs
    but we are always up

    Believe it something's up
    the feeling you come up
    with is that,that's your game sucks
    Sampad is the one,yeah

    you think you're gonna win
    oh you do?you seem so weak
    Sampad is in our side
    they never let us down!

    Sampad is the one,yeah
    we will rock them all,yeah
    no one has the gut
    to compete with Sampad,YEAH***

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    #2

    Re: is it appropriate for cheerleadering for a volleyball team?

    First: I am not a professional Iranian volleyball team cheer writer.

    You asked about whether it is appropriate, not about incorrect English, so I will respond to that. I was taught that cheers should not put down the other team, they should only talk about how good your team is. So I would change the following phrases:

    you seem so weak”
    your game sucks”

    The phrase “no one has the guts to compete with Sampad” might be OK. I think it is borderline.

    Note: There are a number of English errors in your cheer too, but it is still understandable.

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