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    Kindly check my grammar

    Hello sir/maam!

    I have to sentences at different paragraph. Number 1 looks fine to me, but in number 2 I'm confused in using to improving.
    Should I used to improve

    1. This enquiry with significant findings funnels in decision making in achieving quality services.

    2. This tool focuses on client satisfaction and provides information targeted to improving the program rather than identifying its impacts.
    Last edited by ranthrave; 12-Nov-2010 at 12:57. Reason: incomplete sentence

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    Re: Kindly check my grammar

    Quote Originally Posted by ranthrave View Post
    I have two sentences from different paragraphs. Number 1 looks fine to me, but in number 2 I'm confused about using to improving.
    Should I used to improve?

    1. This enquiry with significant findings funnels in decision making in achieving quality services. This does not make any sense to me.

    2. This tool focuses on client satisfaction and provides information targeted at improving the program rather than identifying its impacts.
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    Re: Kindly check my grammar

    Quote Originally Posted by Rover_KE View Post
    Rover
    Thank you sir

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