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    Help. Is this sentence correct?

    An observation that I made during yesterdays game was a young child sat directly in front of me - probably still at primary school - being more interested in the game he was playing on his mobile phone than game he had come to watch.

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    Re: Help. Is this sentence correct?

    Quote Originally Posted by boozl View Post
    An observation that I made during yesterday's game was that of a young child who sat directly in front of me - probably still at in primary school - being was more interested in the game he was playing on his mobile phone than the game he had come to watch.
    A few of possibly many suggestions.

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    Re: Help. Is this sentence correct?

    Quote Originally Posted by billmcd View Post
    A few of possibly many suggestions.
    Thanks and so simple looking at it a second time. He was at the game, not at primary school and he was on his mobile phone.

    Thanks again

    Boozl

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