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    correction

    I think it is a little strange to use keep in the following sentence.
    I wish to keep our friendship forever!
    How to correct the sentence?

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    Re: correction

    Quote Originally Posted by ziawj2 View Post
    I think it is a little strange to use keep in the following sentence.
    I wish to keep our friendship forever!
    How to correct the sentence?
    It's OK. You could say, "I'd like us to stay friends forever!"

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    Please name your threads something relevant , eg. "keep". Don't use generic terms like "correction" or "sentence", etc, especially if you're going to have a few curren threads all called the same.

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    Re: correction

    Quote Originally Posted by ziawj2 View Post
    I think it is a little strange to use keep in the following sentence.
    I wish to keep our friendship forever!
    How to correct the sentence?
    Yes, it seems a little strange. Perhaps old-fashioned or poetic.

    More often you'd hear:
    "I hope we can stay friends forever"
    "I hope we're friends forever'

    "I wish to" is very formal.

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