I am currently writing a cover letter and I want to introduce about what I have been studying in college. Since I have two minors in both Math and Finance, I got confused about how to put them together in one sentence but don't make it sound weird.
Grammatically, I think it should be right as follow,
"As a major in Accounting and minors in both Math and Finance at XXX College, I believe that...."
Someone told me that the above sentence sound weird and should be written as follow,
"As a major in Accounting and a minor in both Math and Finance at XXX College, I believe that ....."
Can anyone help me to rephrase it? or tell me which way is correct?
Thank you very much.
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