Results 1 to 2 of 2

    • Join Date: Nov 2010
    • Posts: 5
    #1

    Help in rephrasing the sentence

    I have presented a poster titled “Advance Healthcare Analytics” at International Conference on Services in Emerging Markets (ICSEM) 2010 at Indian School of Business (ISB) Hyderabad and IBM Collaborative Academia Research Exchange (I-CARE) 2009 and 2010 which mainly focused on how an insurance company and healthcare should focus around controlling cost and delivering high quality healthcare.

    Can someone help me rephrasing the bold sentence ?

    I can replace focused with concentrated, but its not sounding that good.


    • Join Date: Nov 2010
    • Posts: 5
    #2

    Re: Help in rephrasing the sentence

    Can any one help me regarding this ??

Similar Threads

  1. Rephrasing the sentence
    By neoronnie in forum Ask a Teacher
    Replies: 2
    Last Post: 12-Nov-2010, 19:22
  2. [Grammar] rephrasing a sentence
    By Unregistered in forum Ask a Teacher
    Replies: 1
    Last Post: 27-Feb-2010, 12:02
  3. Rephrasing of sentence
    By Tan Elaine in forum Ask a Teacher
    Replies: 1
    Last Post: 17-Jul-2009, 18:46
  4. Rephrasing a sentence
    By MysticIndia in forum Ask a Teacher
    Replies: 1
    Last Post: 05-Feb-2009, 17:44
  5. rephrasing a sentence
    By Teashia1 in forum Ask a Teacher
    Replies: 2
    Last Post: 08-Feb-2006, 04:56

Bookmarks

Posting Permissions

  • You may not post new threads
  • You may not post replies
  • You may not post attachments
  • You may not edit your posts
  •