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    Kindly check my small para

    When your work speaks itself, you really donít have to talk big about it. We are sincerely focused and dedicatedly committed to exceed our clientsí expectations. We never compete with others, but ourselves and raise the bar of excellence every time.

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    Re: Kindly check my small para

    Quote Originally Posted by new2grammar View Post
    When your work speaks itself, you really donít have to talk big about it. We are sincerely focused and dedicatedly committed to exceed our clientsí expectations. We never compete with others, but ourselves and raise the bar of excellence every time.

    ***** A NON-TEACHER'S OPINION *****


    Newgrammar,


    You have written a very nice paragraph. May I suggest a few

    changes?

    When your work speaks for itself, you really don't have to

    boast about it. We are focused and dedicated to exceeding

    our clients' expectations. Raising the bar of excellence every

    time, we compete with ourselves, not with others.


    Thank you & have a nice day.

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