Heidi
Member
- Joined
- Apr 30, 2009
- Member Type
- Student or Learner
- Native Language
- Chinese
- Home Country
- Taiwan
- Current Location
- Taiwan
Dear friends,
Would you please help me modify the following sentences to make them more natural? I feel a little strange about the layout of some of these sentences, for example, don't we usually put the word 'where' immediately after a place we're talking about? Such as, "the garden shed was the place where Mary kept a pig". And the word 'who' can be used to talk about animals? Thank you!
They really do focus on rescuing animals who are being abused by people, which is horrible. They also provide shelter for these animals where they're safe and they're being protected from being abused but also protected from the weather outside.
Would you please help me modify the following sentences to make them more natural? I feel a little strange about the layout of some of these sentences, for example, don't we usually put the word 'where' immediately after a place we're talking about? Such as, "the garden shed was the place where Mary kept a pig". And the word 'who' can be used to talk about animals? Thank you!
They really do focus on rescuing animals who are being abused by people, which is horrible. They also provide shelter for these animals where they're safe and they're being protected from being abused but also protected from the weather outside.