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    Hi there,
    Please proofread the following sentences.

    Global warming has brought a lot of adverse effects on our climates, food, lives, etc. Pollutions have become so serious that some predict most species including human beings will be extinct in 100 years.
    Environmental activists urge that environmental protection should start from individual's efforts. Some people however claim that environmental protection is a national or international issue. Each country should make efforts. Individual can do very little about it. Do you agree with this view?

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    simon

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    Re: question

    Consider rewording the words and phrases in red:

    Global warming has brought a lot of adverse effects on our climates, food, lives, etc. Pollutions have become so serious that some predict most species including human beings will be extinct in 100 years.
    Environmental activists urge that environmental protection should start from individual's efforts. Some people however claim that environmental protection is a national or international issue. Each country should make efforts. Individual can do very little about it. Do you agree with this view?

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