Georgis
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- Joined
- Nov 27, 2010
- Member Type
- Student or Learner
- Native Language
- Greek
- Home Country
- Greece
- Current Location
- Greece
hello!
can some one check my motivation letter for any structure or grammar mistakes or any other mistakes!!
thanks!
Dear admissions officers.
I am hereby applying for entrance for the International business administration program at the Erasmus University Rotterdam in September 2011.My purpose in this letter is to present my reasons for choosing your university and to provide my general background.
First of all, I would like to introduce myself. My name is George and I was born and raised in Corfu a small island in Greece, my father is from Greece but my mother is from the U.S.A. Due to my mother I was speaking English from a very young age. Later on while I was in high school and until now during the summertime I am working at our small family business at a tourist resort, this resulted to be in continuous contact with people from every part of earth all summer long. Working during summertime helped me practice my English speaking more and become more social since I was all the time in contact with tourist. Our family business was also a good opportunity for me to get more involved and participate at the business management.
During high school from the early years I had already decide what I wanted to do, and that was business management. I followed the business administration and economy curse in high school. I graduated high school in Corfu and continued my studies for the next two years in Athens where I live until now. In July I will obtain my post-secondary diploma in business Administration and Economy.
I want to enroll in the IBA program because I want to take my knowledge and my studies to the next level. I want to have the opportunity to study a profession that I have always wanted to do. From when I was in high school I was getting involved with anything that had to do with business I followed curses at high school, worked at our business and always tried to keep up the good results, I was very energetic and willing to take more responsibilities but I first need to have the right knowledge so now I am putting all my energy to do the best I can do at my studies. I believe that enrolling in the IBA program at Erasmus University is the best thing I can do for my future.
After researching European universities, I have come to the conclusion that Erasmus University is the perfect match for my aims. For start Netherlands is a country a lot more advanced in social science, modern economy, structure and many more than other countries. Among several great features of this institution the most important for me is that students from around the world are attending variety of programs and with a very good educational program and environment it is the university I hope to continue my studies.
Finally, being very motivated and ambitious i want to work on international level and experience the benefits of teamwork, and I believe that Erasmus University is the perfect place to start my career, since the institute is international the experience you gain is very important for your future career business.
Thank you for considering my application and for your time.
Sincerely yours,
can some one check my motivation letter for any structure or grammar mistakes or any other mistakes!!
thanks!
Dear admissions officers.
I am hereby applying for entrance for the International business administration program at the Erasmus University Rotterdam in September 2011.My purpose in this letter is to present my reasons for choosing your university and to provide my general background.
First of all, I would like to introduce myself. My name is George and I was born and raised in Corfu a small island in Greece, my father is from Greece but my mother is from the U.S.A. Due to my mother I was speaking English from a very young age. Later on while I was in high school and until now during the summertime I am working at our small family business at a tourist resort, this resulted to be in continuous contact with people from every part of earth all summer long. Working during summertime helped me practice my English speaking more and become more social since I was all the time in contact with tourist. Our family business was also a good opportunity for me to get more involved and participate at the business management.
During high school from the early years I had already decide what I wanted to do, and that was business management. I followed the business administration and economy curse in high school. I graduated high school in Corfu and continued my studies for the next two years in Athens where I live until now. In July I will obtain my post-secondary diploma in business Administration and Economy.
I want to enroll in the IBA program because I want to take my knowledge and my studies to the next level. I want to have the opportunity to study a profession that I have always wanted to do. From when I was in high school I was getting involved with anything that had to do with business I followed curses at high school, worked at our business and always tried to keep up the good results, I was very energetic and willing to take more responsibilities but I first need to have the right knowledge so now I am putting all my energy to do the best I can do at my studies. I believe that enrolling in the IBA program at Erasmus University is the best thing I can do for my future.
After researching European universities, I have come to the conclusion that Erasmus University is the perfect match for my aims. For start Netherlands is a country a lot more advanced in social science, modern economy, structure and many more than other countries. Among several great features of this institution the most important for me is that students from around the world are attending variety of programs and with a very good educational program and environment it is the university I hope to continue my studies.
Finally, being very motivated and ambitious i want to work on international level and experience the benefits of teamwork, and I believe that Erasmus University is the perfect place to start my career, since the institute is international the experience you gain is very important for your future career business.
Thank you for considering my application and for your time.
Sincerely yours,