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    Punctuation

    Is the sentence below confusing because it seems as if "in case of" refers to "administration"? In fact, it doesn't, but I'm not sure how to make this clear. Would putting a comma after "repairs" be a possible solution?

    "Our service package includes working time, travel time, and replacement material, as well as customer consultation in case of malfunction repairs and administration."

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    Re: Punctuation

    This is what a non-native non-expert (e.g. I) would do:

    Our service package includes working time, travel time, and replacement material, administration, and customer consultation in case of malfunction repairs.

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    Re: Punctuation

    Quote Originally Posted by corum View Post
    This is what a non-native non-expert (e.g. I) would do:

    Our service package includes working time, travel time, and replacement material, administration, and customer consultation in case of malfunction repairs.
    I realize I could get rid of the first "and" and "as well as" or put "adminstration" in a different spot, but I'm wondering if one could just add a comma after "repairs."

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