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    Have I made this sentenece correctly?

    Hi there!

    Have I made the following sentenece correctly?

    As the tension between the two neighbors (south and north korea) build
    up, the ramification of these incidentes has yet to be seen.

    Thanks very much indeed.

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    #2

    Re: Have I made this sentenece correctly?

    Quote Originally Posted by Nathan Mckane View Post
    Hi there!

    Have I made conctructed the following sentenece correctly?

    As the tension between the two neighbors (South and North Korea) is building
    up, the ramifications of these incidents have yet to be seen.

    Thanks very much indeed.
    If 'as' is not synonymous with 'because', the sentence is not coherent (to me).

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    Re: Have I made this sentenece correctly?

    Quote Originally Posted by Nathan Mckane View Post
    Hi there!

    Have I made the following sentenece correctly?

    As the tension between the two neighbors (south and north korea) build
    up, the ramification of these incidentes has yet to be seen.

    Thanks very much indeed.
    My suggestions:

    As the tension between the two neighbors (South and North Korea) builds
    up, the ramification of these incidents has yet to be seen.

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