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    #1

    familiy happiness reaches the top

    And now family happiness and career reach the top.

    I can understand "career reaches the top", but what about the family happiness?

    Could I rewrite it as: An now your family is happy and your career reaches the top?

    What's your opinion?

    Thanks.

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    Re: familiy happiness reaches the top

    Quote Originally Posted by ziawj2 View Post
    And now family happiness and career reach the top.

    I can understand "career reaches the top", but what about the family happiness?

    Could I rewrite it as: An now your family is happy and your career reaches the top?

    What's your opinion?

    Thanks.
    This is problematic because the original sentence is out of context. It sounds like family happiness and career have reached the top of a priority list. "Career reaches the top" has no meaning for me by itself. You need to include the context to get a more meaningful response.

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    Re: familiy happiness reaches the top

    It is a sentence from my student's writing to congratulate his boss's 50th wedding anniversary.

    The student uses "Career reaches the top" to mean "the boss's career is the peak, very successfull".

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