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    revising of two sentences 2

    Dear teachers,

    Would you revise the following two sentences?

    How can I possibly get in touch with him when he is not in town?
    You canít possibly imagine how happy Jesse was when Tom agreed to hire him.

    Thanks for your efforts.

    Regards,

    V

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    Re: revising of two sentences 2

    Did you mean paraphrase rather than revise?
    They don't need revision; they are fine.

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