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    #1

    proofread

    Hi there,
    Please proofread:

    The less we dispose rubbish, the less pollution we produce.

    Tks
    simon clar

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    Re: proofread

    The less we dispose of rubbish, the less pollution we produce.

    That is now correct grammatically, but it may not make sense. Rubbish has to be disposed of in some way.

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    Re: proofread

    Perhaps: "The less rubbish we dispose of (as opposed to recycling), the less pollution we create."

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