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    #1

    please proofread

    Hi there,

    1. For fighting against corruption, what a government can do is more than individuals do.

    2. For fighting against corruption, what a government can do is more than what individuals can do.


    3.For fighting against corruption, what a government can do is more than individuals' efforts.

    tks
    simon

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    #2

    Re: please proofread

    A government can do more in the fight against corruption than individuals can.

    Rover

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