creat a glorious future

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ziawj2

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I think the phrase "creat a glorious future" is Chinglish.
Could I make the following correction:
I'm sure I'll work hard at school to have a glorious future and to repay your kindness.
 

jerry081958

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I think the phrase "creat a glorious future" is Chinglish.
Could I make the following correction:
I'm sure I'll work hard at school to have a glorious future and to repay your kindness.

"Glorious" is maybe a bit much. How about "successful"?

Prepare for a successful future!
Work hard in school and prepare yourself for a successful future!
 

Tdol

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How about a bright future?
 

jerry081958

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Oh, I like the one. Bright idea!
 
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