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    marching on my road

    Ever since I was born, you are the everlasting shining star in my life guiding me marching on my road of life by which I take every step forward.
    Could I make the following correction:
    Ever since I was born, you are an everlasting shining star, guiding me finding the right goal in my life when I take every step forward.

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    Re: marching on my road

    Ever since I was born, you are an everlasting shining star, guiding me finding the right goal in my life when I take every step forward.
    My suggestion would be:

    Ever since I was born, you have been an ever-shining star, guiding me to find the right goal in my life with every step I take.

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