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    grammar check required

    "I had been walking for about an hour when I finally saw a small house by the river. I realized at once that was the house he was talking about. I came up to it and knocked on the door. There was a woman sitting by the window and reading the book. When she heard me knocking she stood up and went to open the door."

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    Re: grammar check required

    Quote Originally Posted by ostap77 View Post
    "I had been walking for about an hour when I finally saw a small house by the river. I realized at once that was the house he was talking (or: had been talking/had talked) about. I came (more likely: went) up to it and knocked on the door. There was a woman sitting by the window and reading the book. When she heard me knocking she stood up and went more likely: (came) to open the door."
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    Re: grammar check required

    Quote Originally Posted by ostap77 View Post
    "I had been walking for about an hour when I finally saw a small house by the river. I realized at once it was the house he had been talking about. I went/walked up to it and knocked on the door. There was a woman reading a book sitting by the window. When she heard me knocking she stood up and came to open the door."
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    Re: grammar check required

    "I had been walking for about an hour when I finally saw a small house by the river. I realized at once that it was the house he told me (had talked) about. I came went up to it and knocked on the door. There was a A woman was sitting by the window and reading the a book. When she heard me knocking, she stood up and went came to open the door."

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