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    A short writing. (using words : shame, criticism, excuse, trick)

    Hello.
    Thanks for helping me in advance.

    I just made a short writing.
    I'm not sure how to use words shame, criticism, excuse and trick.
    Specially sentences underlined.

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    Title :
    1. "Why?" is not Question but Criticism.

    Body :
    "Why?" is not always question but rather criticism.
    "Why so late?"
    "Why do you watch TV for the whole weekend?"
    2. These questions are strong criticism. The answers to these questions possibly obtained are just excuses for hiding and tricking.
    “Why did you fail the exam?”
    3. The question with “why?” make kids feel shame and force them to make an excuse which is meaningless.
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    Thank you.

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    Re: A short writing. (using words : shame, criticism, excuse, trick)

    To make the title a little more clear, I suggest When "Why?" is not a Question but Criticism

    Remember your articles! 'a question'.

    The only possible answers to these questions will be excuses

    'force' -> 'forces', 'a meaningless excuse'

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