Could you please correct my essay?
"The Government should pay for colleges and universities; Education should be
free for everybody" Do you agree with this statement or not?
I quite agree with the following statement and I will try to elaborate on my own opinion
(or argument?).Everyone wants to receive a good education not only to find a job and get by later(can I use then?),prosper, but also to indulge their particular interests.
Getting a good education is an engaging process that, first of all,
involeves(orrequires a lot of patience. One's student 'syears are always considered to be the most unforgettable and interesting.
During this time you make a lot of friends, become independent
( is it possible to say an independent person?),, learn more and more interesting things everyday. and get readyIt allows one to prepare for the process of sharing your knowlwdge one day, but at the same time being a little excited and nervous about it (I wanted to put 'at the back of your mind' but I am not sure if it is necessary and where it can be put exactly).Getting a good education can be a goal but not a dream (why not a dream?) since everyone has the right to have it. These are thePeople from a lower social class whosuffer from this problem most of all.
The government should consider the needs and interests of such people and realise that they deserve to become educated as well.
It behooves the government to think especially about young people whose ambitions can help to
(Isn't it a mistake to say; 'to help at building a strong country?') makebuild a strong country.
There are many things that can change peoples' lives and I think that the government's decision to make education free for everyone is the most important one.
Could I write 'people's life' as well instead of peoples' lives?
(I prefer "peoples' lives")
My comments/suggestions. By the way, where does the "government" get its money?