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    #1

    proofread

    Hi there,
    Please proofread the following paragraph.

    A lot of American teenagers will spend a week's holiday watching TV. They do less exercise. Spending a week's holiday is too much. This will disturb their social relationships because they will rarely go out to meet their friends. They will rarely talk with their families. They haven't enough time to study. They should balance their time between watching TV and study.

    Tks
    simon

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    #2

    Re: proofread

    any idea?
    simon

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    Re: proofread

    A lot of American teenagers will spend a week's holiday watching TV. They will do little exercise, and spending their holiday like this is too much. It will disrupt their social relationships because they will rarely go out to meet their friends and will rarely talk with their families. They will not leave themselves enough time to study. They should balance their time between watching TV and studying.

    Thanks
    Rover

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