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    #1

    sweeteners/sweatshops

    Many poorer countries which are giving sweeteners to foreign corporations do not approve of the sweatshops built in their territories.

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    #2

    Re: sweeteners/sweatshops

    Quote Originally Posted by panicmonger View Post
    Many poorer countries which are giving sweeteners to foreign corporations do not approve of the sweatshops built in their territories.

    Is the sentence correct to you?
    Thank you.
    have a nice weekend.
    Will it be better to change the last part of the sentence?

    Many poorer countries which are giving sweeteners to foreign corporations do not approve of the sweatshops to be built in their territories.

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