Anyone can help me check this paragraph?

[gagagugu]

I just write an article called "Travelling to the Paradisaical Lijiang".

The first paragraph is like this: There’s a popular saying spreading around Lijiang: ”The sun will still sink without pushing, time will still go by without delay. Just lead a life as if you walked together with a snail, there is no more panic.” I think many people like me have a Lijiang dream.

Would someone like to help me check this paragraph? I want it to be native.

 

[Richard1]

Hi,

I'm not clear what you're asking. Are you wanting the ideas in the paragraph to be written using the sort of phraseology you'd find in say the UK or US?

Regards

 

[gagagugu]

Yes, Actually it's orignially an old saying in Chinese. So I suppose there is kind of similar English idiom or old saying in English. If there is so, I would like to know. Thanks for your patient check and great help.