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    #1

    a nosebleed

    - Nobody punched my nose. I have a nosebleed because the weather is too hot.

    - Are these sentences natural?

    Thanks so much to Teachers and members,

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    #2

    Re: a nosebleed


    Nobody punched my me in the nose. I have a nosebleed because of the dry weather is too hot.

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    #3

    Re: a nosebleed

    Quote Originally Posted by lauralie2 View Post
    Nobody punched my me in the nose. I have a nosebleed because of the dry weather is too hot.
    lauralie's corrected version sounnds to me more natural than the original, but I feel that the original is acceptable.

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