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    Question Please check my resume

    Hello,

    I've posted it here (not in a CV section) because the only thing what I need is checking that cv in terms of language mistakes :)

    So please, check it, it's quite short:

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    Objective:

    Education:

    Work experience:

    Languages:

    Personal info:

    Activities:
    Last edited by ambitiousBeginner; 30-Dec-2010 at 00:27.

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    Re: Please check my resume

    First of all, Gil, I really appreciate your work! Thank you!

    Objective:
    To obtain a challenging position as an Admin
    Administrative Intern in with XYZ. It will be a great opportunity to increase my knowledge and gain work experience in the field of my interests, which I believe will bring benefits in the future. To maintain student status I am going to enroll for MA studies (1,5 year).
    This section talks about you. What will you do for XYZ?


    What about the sentence below at the end of this paragraph? Please proofread it if it's not correct.
    I will make best effort to do all tasks that will be assigned to me because it is a job which I have always dreamt about.

    And four more sentences I've just came up with:

    - Basic knowledge of Java/C++ language.

    - Basic knowledge of using XYZ and ABC //I don't know if the word using is correct (maybe 'operating' is better?). XYZ and ABC are the names of computer applications

    - Advanced in the use of Microsoft Word, Excel, PowerPoint.
    Last edited by ambitiousBeginner; 30-Dec-2010 at 00:27.

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    Re: Please check my resume

    Thank you again :)

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