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    Verification

    Lonely skies surrounding the mountains of my dreams. My heart is gone in the night.

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    Re: Verification

    Welcome to the board, Matsu.

    What is your question?

    Rover

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    #3

    Re: Verification

    Thanks for the reply....anything wrong with the sentences?
    Thanks!

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    Re: Verification

    Change "surrounding" to "surround."

    Otherwise, okay grammatically.

    What do you mean by "My heart is gone in the night" though?
    I'm not a teacher, but I write for a living. Please don't ask me about 2nd conditionals, but I'm a safe bet for what reads well in (American) English.

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    Re: Verification

    Thanks Barb_D !!!

    MY HEART IS GONE IN THE NIGHT: expression of some kind of nostalgia...

    thanks!
    matsu

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