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      • Native Language:
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      • Iran
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    #1

    Proofread

    Dear native speakers,
    Would you please read the following sentence and say where it needs revision:
    "Among the world's peoples, there can be found few peoples who have lived with poetry and have linked poetry with the most human and purest moments of their thinking as much as Iranians have."
    Thanks in advance.

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    #2

    Re: Proofread

    "Among the world's peoples, few can be found who have lived with poetry and have linked poetry with the most human and purest moments of their thinking as much as Iranians have."

    Rover

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