lokilein
New member
- Joined
- Jan 5, 2011
- Member Type
- Interested in Language
- Native Language
- German
- Home Country
- Germany
- Current Location
- Germany
Hi all,
I just finished my motivation letter with the help of others here. It's ought not to be longer than 300 words, is now 350, so I am looking forward to some hints. What could I leave out or correct?
Thanks in advance for your help,
Lokilein
Motivation letter
Dear Sir or Madam,
I just returned from a year-long stay aboard and now want to completely focus on my career, thus I appreciate this opportunity to provide further information in support of my application for the International Business Management programme at *University*.
While applying, I perfectly realize that the competition is tough. I feel, however, that I have many abilities and strengths that make me eligible for your programme.
During my travels I could devote myself fully to my interests in different cultures, languages and travelling, and even expand them. Due to my English knowledge and organizational abilities I was offered a job as supervisor in a New Zealand company, later I travelled to Argentina where I worked as customer support agent and was again promoted to be the co- team leader of a group of agents a short time later. To some extent I had free space to put my intuitively experienced ideal of organization into practice. To organize and facilitate, to improve workflows and to embrace teamwork, to create a positive work atmosphere were some of the given tasks. The implementation taught me valuable basic management lessons in foreign labour conditions. Prior to my journey I worked almost two years in all kinds of filmmaking departments which built up and required a great deal of organizational skills, teamwork, liability, flexibility and creativity.
With my application I want to take one crucial step further towards being a successful person in career and life. Not only the possibility to study abroad, create international networks with foreign students, enhance knowledge about foreign markets and continuously consolidate my language and learning skills at partner universities, attracted my interest but also the motivating and supportive study environment I read and heard about from a friend who is studying IBU at *University*. He stated his satisfaction with the *City* campus and *foreign university*, both highly prestigious universities.
I want to take the opportunity to study at *University* right now to use all energy and capabilities I accumulated before and during my journey and look forward to hearing from you.
Yours sincerely,
I just finished my motivation letter with the help of others here. It's ought not to be longer than 300 words, is now 350, so I am looking forward to some hints. What could I leave out or correct?
Thanks in advance for your help,
Lokilein
Motivation letter
Dear Sir or Madam,
I just returned from a year-long stay aboard and now want to completely focus on my career, thus I appreciate this opportunity to provide further information in support of my application for the International Business Management programme at *University*.
While applying, I perfectly realize that the competition is tough. I feel, however, that I have many abilities and strengths that make me eligible for your programme.
During my travels I could devote myself fully to my interests in different cultures, languages and travelling, and even expand them. Due to my English knowledge and organizational abilities I was offered a job as supervisor in a New Zealand company, later I travelled to Argentina where I worked as customer support agent and was again promoted to be the co- team leader of a group of agents a short time later. To some extent I had free space to put my intuitively experienced ideal of organization into practice. To organize and facilitate, to improve workflows and to embrace teamwork, to create a positive work atmosphere were some of the given tasks. The implementation taught me valuable basic management lessons in foreign labour conditions. Prior to my journey I worked almost two years in all kinds of filmmaking departments which built up and required a great deal of organizational skills, teamwork, liability, flexibility and creativity.
With my application I want to take one crucial step further towards being a successful person in career and life. Not only the possibility to study abroad, create international networks with foreign students, enhance knowledge about foreign markets and continuously consolidate my language and learning skills at partner universities, attracted my interest but also the motivating and supportive study environment I read and heard about from a friend who is studying IBU at *University*. He stated his satisfaction with the *City* campus and *foreign university*, both highly prestigious universities.
I want to take the opportunity to study at *University* right now to use all energy and capabilities I accumulated before and during my journey and look forward to hearing from you.
Yours sincerely,
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