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    #1

    Cool plz correct them

    Hello..........
    Please take your tea otherwise it'll be cold.
    I looked at him, similing.
    Don't speak while taking your meal.
    thanks

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    #2

    Re: plz correct them

    Please take your tea, otherwise it'll be cold.
    Very good! But I added a comma.

    I looked at him, smiling.
    Perfect again! Nice sentence... I read your sentence, smiling.

    Don't speak while EATING your meal.
    You don't TAKE meals, you EAT them.

    Very good English!

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