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    application

    Please highlight the grammatical mistakes in the following application which I've to post on fb for an administrative spot.


    I apply for the administrative position but i don't want wasting time by reasoning my eligibility and capabilities as I see a countably less number of approaches. So it's seemingly easy a task of churning out the one among this countable a number of applicants. But I assure you that I'll devotedly do my share of work where need be, without a twinge of hesitance.



    Many thanks before hand.

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    Re: plz help!

    man why am i always left unanswered? should I envisage this website to be of no use?

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    Re: plz help!

    Quote Originally Posted by rohanvora View Post
    man why am i always left unanswered? should I envisage this website to be of no use?
    If you come up with that sort of complaint because you haven't received a response just 26 minutes after posting your request, people are going to be in no hurry to help you.

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    Re: application

    okay then please you hlp because I'm to post it asap.

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    Re: application

    Quote Originally Posted by rohanvora View Post
    I am applying for the administrative position, but i I don't do not want to wastinge time by reasoning discussing my eligibility and capabilities as I see a countably less number of approaches. So it's seemingly easy a task of churning out the one among this countable a number of applicants. But I assure you that I'll devotedly do my share of work where need be, without a twinge of any hesitance hesitation.
    I am afraid I don't really understand what you are trying to say in the two parts I have underlined.

    You asked us to highlight the mistakes in grammar, not the style, but I have to say that the overall impression given by your application is that you cannot be bothered to send in a proper application and that, if appointed, you'll work when you have to. I feel that this approach is unlikely to attract a positive response.

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    Re: application

    thank you so much

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