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    This tree can dance to the music.

    Would you please read the following dialogs? If there are any awkward lines, please show me. Thank you.

    A: Look at this. This bird can speak.
    B: Wow, I can't believe it.

    A: Look at this. The flowers can eat bugs.
    B: Wow, I can't believe it.

    A: Look at this. This tree can dance to the music.
    B: Wow, I can't believe it.

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    Re: This tree can dance to the music.

    Quote Originally Posted by giddyman View Post
    A: Look at this. This bird can speak.
    B: Wow, I can't believe it.

    A: Look at this. The flowers can eat bugs.
    B: Wow, I can't believe it.

    A: Look at this. This tree can dance to the music.
    B: Wow, I can't believe it.
    I can't say that these are sentences that I encounter frequently, but they are fine. You might consider changing the underlined the in the second pair to these.

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