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    is this letter right


    is this letter right like this



    Dear Sir,
    RE:Request a welcome (reception) letter

    As part of an exchange of short duration, and given the importance and development of your faculty, I have come verry respectfully request your high benevolence kindly send me a welcome (reception) letter to conduct a short course in your faculty.
    I wish to inform you that I am holding a Master degree in management sciences specialty Relationship Marketing, and I am currently preparing a doctoral degree in the same spécialité, and I am a tenured professor at the University of aberdeen (UK).
    Obviously, all living expenses are solely dependent on me.
    Awaiting a favorable response from you, please accept the expression of my deep respect.

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    Re: is this letter right

    Hi,

    To whom is it addressed and what is the context? It's somewhat difficult to know how much information you need to give without knowing this. Is it simply an application form that you're asking for?

    It sounds very stilted and far too formal. I'd be inclined to leave out most of it. If all you're asking for is the application form then just say,

    "Dear Sir,
    I am interested in taking a course at your faculty. Would you please send me an application form.

    Yours faithfully,

    etc.,"

    Regards

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    Post Re: is this letter right

    thanks
    and sorry this is my letter
    Nouveau Document texte.txt
    is it whright lik this

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    #4

    Re: is this letter right

    That link doesn't work for me.

    Rover

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    Re: is this letter right

    Quote Originally Posted by marketeur View Post
    thanks
    and sorry this is my letter
    Nouveau Document texte.txt
    is it whright lik this
    Hi,

    Did you take note of my earlier reply? The attachment doesn't seem much different. It's just too stilted and old fashioned. Use the suggestion I gave.

    Rgds

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