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    this is my writing ,is it correct ?please help me

    hello

    how are you?


    Curriculum Vitae = CV

    this is my writing ,is it correct ?please help me




    My name is Al, was born in / / H



    Corresponding to / /19 AD in the Kingdom of Bahrain in particular Governorate of Z ,Z is one of the most important areas of Manamah. I am single and male, i am Bahraini.



    Home phone number



    Mobile No.



    E-mail



    Education got a bachelor's degree in English very good estimate is too high



    Ratios %



    I graduated in 1



    And got a excellent rating in the intensive English language course four years ago.



    , i am studying Computer



    And study the English language through some sites on the Internet.



    I like English very much so that i majored in English



    I enjoy while learning English



    I like English literature at the same time learning the rules



    I am always trying to develop myself by making some of conversation with myself , reading books and novels , writing short stories and studying the grammars and watching English language programs useful



    In high school I got to appreciate the excellent and ratios were %



    I do not have a job now



    My hobbies



    I love reading so much. every day read English novels and stories



    The main reason for my desire to complete my education is my passion and my love for science and simultaneously I hope to be a very useful element in the national




    Many of the teachers liked my way in teaching during field application



    Teachers say about me that I have committed and diligent student fond of in research and eager student, and say that I have a passion for science and love of science and knowledge and I have a great desire to pursue higher studies


    Available upon request
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    Re: this is my writing ,is it correct ?please help me

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    Re: this is my writing ,is it correct ?please help me

    My name is Al, was born in / / H

    Corresponding to / /19 AD in the Kingdom of Bahrain in particular Governorate of Z ,Z is one of the most important areas of Manamah. This does not belong in a CV
    I am single and male, i ! Do you want a job?!! am Bahraini.

    Home phone number

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    Education got a bachelor's degree in English very good estimate is too high - I wonder what this means. More importantly, a potential employer will have no idea what it means.

    ...
    I'm afraid I don't have time for a detailed critique. The parts I've underlined are in an inappropriate style for a CV. There are many Internet sites that give advice and models for CVs. (I found nearly 5 million by searching for "CV or resume").

    Good luck

    b
    PS This is my one and only contribution in response to CVs

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