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    #1

    because in most of the

    I'm not sure about this sentnce if its correct?

    Now a day, we cannot trust any photo, or any beauty we see because in most of the cases it is about a fake photo or body made by Photoshop or cosmetic surgery.

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    #2

    Re: because in most of the

    Quote Originally Posted by jeremy_12 View Post
    I'm not sure about this sentnce if its correct?

    Now a day, we cannot trust any photo, or any beauty we see because in most of the cases it is about a fake photo or body made by Photoshop or cosmetic surgery.
    ***Not a teacher***
    This is a really good attempt. There are a couple of things I would suggest changing:

    Nowadays, we cannot trust any photo or any beauty we see, because in most cases the photo is a fake made by Photoshop and the beauty is a body enhanced by cosmetic surgery

    This removes the question about 'it', where it is not clear which noun it refers back to.

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    #3

    Re: because in most of the

    Also, rather than saying it is afake photo, you could say that a photo has been retouched or something, as they normally start with a real photo and edit it.

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