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    Hi dears,

    Please let me know, what was my mistake in the phrase below?

    Joćo needs a handbook of machine 12 serial n° 111, could you please send us us urgent.


    The handbook can be in Spanish or English.

    Regards,

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    Quote Originally Posted by mstudent View Post
    Hi dears,

    Please let me know, what was my mistake in the phrase below?

    Joćo needs a handbook of machine 12 serial 111, could you please send us us urgent.


    The handbook can be in Spanish or English.

    Regards,
    Welcome board mstudent!

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    I think you should write "serial no."
    Urgent is an adjective. you can not use it as an adverb here.
    The adverb for "urgent" is "urgently" but you can not use it here at the end of the sentence.
    Instead of "urgent" you should write "immediately".
    You can also use "urgently" in your sentence:

    "Joćo urgently needs a handbook of machine 12 serial no. 111, could you please send us the handbook immediately?"

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    Quote Originally Posted by mstudent View Post
    Hi dears,

    Please let me know, what was my mistake in the phrase below?

    Joćo needs a handbook of machine 12 serial n° 111, could you please send one to him/us - it's urgent.


    The handbook can be in Spanish or English.

    Regards,

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