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    reword paragraph

    Another practice that started long ago is that sex should only be used for reproduction and that sex for any other reason is a sin, which means that birth control is not allowed. Although the Catholic Church is named, there are many other religions that support this also (Lecture 1). I personally view sex as a good thing. It has many positive qualities, one major thing being stress relief. I am a lucky guy whose wife still enjoys sex also, and if we werenít allowed birth control, we wouldnít be able to afford all the children we would be making. Iím not trying to discredit the Catholic Church, but another reason that I disagree with them and their policies is because of the way they viewed abortion back in the 13th century. At first they allowed abortion as a form of birth control up until a certain number of days depending on if it was a boy or girl. Nowadays, they donít allow abortions at all (Greenberg, Bruess and Conklin, 2011, pg 17). Iím not saying that abortion should be a normal form of birth control; I just think they should allow some form of birth control so that parents arenít making an enormous amount of children that they canít afford to take care of.

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    #2

    Re: reword paragraph

    Have you a question, or are you just ordering us to rephrase that paragraph?

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    #3

    Re: reword paragraph

    Is there a way I can reword this?

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    #4

    Re: reword paragraph

    It's just fine as is.

    I'm wondering why you want to reword it.

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    Re: reword paragraph

    What kind of ultrasound did they use 800 years ago to determine the sex before they did the abortion?

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