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    The course of human history

    Hi,

    I just want to say 'I hope my name will be credited in the course of human history, art, and science', but I want to use these two words 'creativity and contributions' in it, so can I say it in this way,

    I hope that the course of human history, art, and science has a place for my creativity and contributions.

    It sounds horrid to me!

    Thanks,
    Lau

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    Re: The course of human history

    I hope that my creativity and contributions to the fields of human art, history, and science will one day be noted.
    I'm not a teacher, but I write for a living. Please don't ask me about 2nd conditionals, but I'm a safe bet for what reads well in (American) English.

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    Re: The course of human history

    Quote Originally Posted by Barb_D View Post
    I hope that my creativity and contributions to the fields of human art, history, and science will one day be noted.
    Thanks! It sounds better and like English now!

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