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And I don't know what I write to conclusion for this
Everyone have strength and weaknesses points in her/his life. In this essay I will describe my professional strength and weaknesses before suggesting ways I can improve.
I have several different strengths in my life. First, my best strength is the ability to be a good listener when someone talks to me. And I have well in computer skill and I have always been intrigued about computers. I am always very helpful and I am patient when I have problem until solving. Also, I like to cooperation with my friends to generate different idea and I am happy to share with. In addition, I like to make other people happy and I like to help someone has a problem in her/his life. Moreover, I always time management to finish early and I am very dedicated when I study. Finally, I like to be friendly and funny also good communication with another people.
I have several different weaknesses in my life. For example, I donít like to work in a group when I have assessment. And I am get angry when nobody helps me. Also sometimes I donít have initiative for somethingís. In addition, I fear of failing in my course and donít get high mark. Moreover, I usually canít critical thinking for problem and sometime I didnít like to negotiation. And I am weakness in English reading. Also, I am very shy when I speak with someone I didnít know her.
On the other hand, I want to improve many things in my life. For example, I would like to improve English reading and I will practice every day. And I want to improve my speaking language and I will talk with my friends and another people I know her/his.
Thank you very much ^^
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