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Please clarify the following in bold.
1. Insight into Steve's personal media needs and encouragement to do the book also came from Wilson Nicholls...
Is this saying "Steve needs personal media" or "Steve wants to make (or create) personal media"?
2. I consider you the "king of the screen." You have put devices in our hands that have amazing information display functions and can be used by anyone. We now live in a screen society, always not far from sticking the next screen in front of our faces.
Would you please rewrite the above more easily?
1. "personal media needs" in this context refer to Steve's needs from the personal media
2. We now live in a screen society, always not far from sticking the next screen in front of our faces.
This sentence is awkward, I would consider moving the second phrase to the beginning of the sentence. Or, I would look for different word choice for "sticking" as it sounds forced.
Now living in a screen society, we are never far from another screen to be put in front of our faces.