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    Correct the sentences please?

    Could you please tell me the correct sentence in the following sentences?
    If both were wrong, suggest me best way to construct the sentence.

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    1.This movie is about a young woman from an orthodox Hindu family, called Deepthi who marries a young business man against her will due to the pressure from her family.

    2.This movie is about a young woman called Deepthi from an orthodox Hindu family who marries a young business man against her will due to the pressure form her family.

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    Re: Correct the sentences please?

    Quote Originally Posted by bspkumar View Post
    Could you please tell me the correct sentence in the following sentences?
    If both were wrong, suggest me best way to construct the sentence.

    Thank you.

    1.This movie is about a young woman from an orthodox Hindu family, called Deepthi who marries a young business man against her will due to the pressure from her family.

    2.This movie is about a young woman called Deepthi, from an orthodox Hindu family, who marries a young business man against her will due to the pressure form her family.
    #2 is OK, I think it's better with the commas.

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    #3

    Re: Correct the sentences please?

    It is "businessman". No blank between "business" and "man".

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    Re: Correct the sentences please?

    Thank you all for the reply.

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