eli88
New member
- Joined
- Feb 16, 2011
- Member Type
- Student or Learner
- Native Language
- Spanish
- Home Country
- Uruguay
- Current Location
- Uruguay
Hello everybody!! I'm a new member and I am just about to take the FCE and I have many problems with the writing part, so I would like to ask you help! Would you read this informal email and correct it please ? Thank you!
This is the task:
You recently received an email from your English-speaking friend, Pat, inviting you to stay and asking you to a special party.
Hi Pat,
It was great to hear from you. I’m so excited about spending time with you during the summer that I can't wait anymore.
July is perfect! My parents will be in Italy enjoying a second honney moon so it’s great I’ll have the opportunity to be there with you while they’re out of the country.
About Tim’s birthday, I’ve been thinking what kind of present I can give him, and I want your opinion so what do you think about giving him a t-shirt from my country?
By the way, sorry but I won’t be able to go camping with you, because I am alergic and the doctors advice me that I shouldn’t do things like that.
And finally but not less important, I’d really like to know if we can go to a music concert which will be while I am there.
I’m looking forward to seeing you soon.
Best wishes,
Mary
This is the task:
You recently received an email from your English-speaking friend, Pat, inviting you to stay and asking you to a special party.
Hi Pat,
It was great to hear from you. I’m so excited about spending time with you during the summer that I can't wait anymore.
July is perfect! My parents will be in Italy enjoying a second honney moon so it’s great I’ll have the opportunity to be there with you while they’re out of the country.
About Tim’s birthday, I’ve been thinking what kind of present I can give him, and I want your opinion so what do you think about giving him a t-shirt from my country?
By the way, sorry but I won’t be able to go camping with you, because I am alergic and the doctors advice me that I shouldn’t do things like that.
And finally but not less important, I’d really like to know if we can go to a music concert which will be while I am there.
I’m looking forward to seeing you soon.
Best wishes,
Mary