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    #1

    Help me

    you don't see the people that you love them always but on the otherhand you see the people that you don't love all of the time

    Can you write this in a good way....?

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    #2

    Re: Help me

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    #3

    Re: Help me

    ***Neither a teacher nor a native speaker.***

    Hey,
    I'm sure there are plenty of better versions than mine, but maybe you will like it:
    You don't always see the people you love, but you see the people you don't love all the time.
    You don't always see the people you love, but you see the ones you don't love all the time.

    I know it's pretty simple, but this is how I would write it...

    Cheers!

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    #4

    Re: Help me

    Quote Originally Posted by Dally View Post
    you don't see the people that you love them always but on the otherhand you see the people that you don't love all of the time

    Can you write this in a good way....?
    1. Please give more helpful titles to your threads. People don't want to have to open them to find out what they are about.
    2. Be patient! There is no need to 'up' your thread after just one hour. (If you had given your thread a more helpful title, somebody might have looked at it sooner anyway.)

    You don't always see the people you love, but you see the people you don't love all the time.

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